Kocha-kocha hota hai
Kid meeting her father for the first time. Father does not know that child is his. (oooh like Felicity). Over their next few months… they got on splendidly.
One day child decides to tell him the Truth. But before the Truth comes out, the father kisses the child. How now brown cow?
One day child decides to tell him the Truth. But before the Truth comes out, the father kisses the child. How now brown cow?
3 Comments:
ooohhh....felicity!! i like this drama hindustan...esp the way u pitch this. simple to the point. easy to read.
but answer me this, how can this be different from another story? as in what makes this story stand out as MALAYSIAN? is this a MALAYSIAN problem? or a generis problem?
pls respond to this azhar. we wanna know ure thought abt this. we can relate to it. but we wanna know what's MALAYSIAN abt it.
remember, keep focus. but i like this. u can develop this (coz there's no such thing as a bad idea, but an undevelopped idea...these are my thoughts).
thanks for your contribution. im so proud of you.
Not my cup of tea but workable story.
Good stuff: Issues of identity and parenthood.
Bad stuff: Incest? Come now.
Suggestions: Last part holds no interest to me.
Instead, maybe her expectations of a father figure are shattered when he proves to be amoral or is reinforced by something he does.
What is Malaysian about it?
Johore, where I come from, has the highest case for incest. Is it too Cider House?
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